Wedding, please critique

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Constructive criticism please

Im also trying humans
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4049/4294234716_43fdfeea70.jpg

Going for the oh fcuk its raining but im still happy to be married look.

[whittyp]

It is a nice pensive shot. I would crop little tighter of the right hand slide so that he is looking into the photo. I also though about blurring the background a little to remove the distractions but then I realised that you can actually see the rain so forget that idea. However I would clone out that blob of white next to the post of the very left of the image

[Redal]

It is a nice snap shot, with little thought of background or pose.
You could crop it to his right shoulder, but then he is looking at the side of the frame with his head down , like in shame , which isnt good for a wedding image.

[Epic]

Cheers guys yeah I didn't put this in there book because it doesn't look happy enough. and yeah that white dot does attract the eye doesn't it haha thanks