Chandee

[Haim]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4016/4275437198_8939b5a618.jpg (http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4016/4275437198_8939b5a618_b.jpg)

click for larger size ;)

[StanW]

First, I;d like to see a little more light on her eyes. They seem to be too mdeeply shadowed. The blouse is fine, but the cropping makes it too wide at the bottom of the frame, and it looks heavy.

[fokker]

I fins the way the hands are cut off evenly and completely at the wrists looks very strange, like she has her hands inside her sleeves or something. Other than that it looks good to me.

[Haim]

i didn't crop it... straight out of the camera...

and yeah... you are right about the eyes... she had eye shadow on which made it almost impossible to expose correctly... any how.. it's my firtt time doing a girl shoot so yeah.... next time i'll use my flashes

[StanW]

Try again; she's a very attractive model.

[Haim]

thanks mate.

[Deviant]

yea, she needs to be higher in the frame, that way the head room will look better and you will reveal the hands.

nice skin :)

[Haim]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4059/4280055187_29ea151309.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/haimsadia/4280055187/)

[talan]

The first one is better than the second. She looks quite tense and awkward. The tree trunk in the background coming out of her head is a bit distracting. People are a whole new kettle of fish compared to automotive ay? :p

[Haim]

again.. better = large

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4060/4299529750_7bf56cbd1f.jpg (http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4060/4299529750_7bf56cbd1f_b.jpg)

[Haim]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4352848923_05be8b819e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/haimsadia/4352848923/)

[monkfish]

The Bokeh in the first shot looks a bit ave, almost fake? i dunno doesn't gel with me.