Fashion shoot

[kayLaws]

One of my good friends as starting up a clothing company and he wanted me to take some photos for his summer range. I was down to do it and we went into town last night to sus out the location and get an idea how the photos would turn out. Him and his girlfriend were modeling for sample photos.

The proper shoot with the models and clothes is gonna be shot in the next couple of days, im happy with the photos to some degree but i think could be improved some how, maybe lighting and different angles, tighter crop? I like 2 and 3 the best. Is there anything you guys would suggest i do different?
Please C&C....

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2703/4127761920_98c851c92f.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2753/4127763450_2ba4b9c20d.jpg

3.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2794/4126993017_0bd7162567.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2610/4126994309_398939ccf2.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2665/4127767092_9704274639.jpg

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2648/4127764766_db00a3591a.jpg

[talan]

These are cool shots but im finding my eyes are drawn towards the speaker in every single photo. Any reason for using that as a prop?

[whittyp]

You will need to work on the lighting particularly if you want to avoid unintensional shadows. Also if the photos are going to end up in print you may need to watch out that you have sufficient contrast as often the printing process results in images getting darker.