*NSFW* Model Shots

[danzspan]

http://http://www.flickr.com/photos/41101260@N08/4640337713/I did my first shoot with a model the other day, and these are some of what I came out with.

Obviously some are a little more photoshopped than others...

All comments and criticism welcome. :)

1.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3358/4630618923_bc778cb52f.jpg

2.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4028/4633253939_7beacb3500.jpg

3.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4003/4635263584_c2848051ca.jpg

4.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3415/4640866366_d676328a69.jpg

[Rick0r]

Some awesome stuff there... friend or professional model?

I don't think the lack of expression works in your favour unfortunately.. 1 3 and 4 would have been perfect if she had an open smile.. not all models can do this mind you (smile naturally on command).

I really like number 2, but can't help but think that it'd be better if she was looking more at the camera.

Number 3 looks very cool, do you have it in a wider crop, with the arms etc?

[fokker]

These are good, well done. Having a gorgeous model always helps :)

[Haim]

lovely girl... just something with her eyes doesnt seem right... :S

[danzspan]

Just a friend Rick0r, and I know what you mean about the smile, I tried but it didn't look good.

Haim - I can see what you mean, with number 1 right? I can't quite pick it...

Thanks for you comments guys :)

[Deviant]

Over did the eyes in the last one bro :D

2nd is best.

[StanW]

Take care with those disonnected pieces in the background.

[danzspan]

Sorry, what do you mean Stan?

[fokker]

I'm guessing he means the disconnected limbs. It's kinda bad in #3. It's one of those 'rules' of portrait/people photography, to not cut people off at the joints or to have limbs coming into the frame out of nowhere.

That is the critical photographer part of me, but personally it doesn't ruin my enjoyment of the shot, and most people who aren't educated on the 'rules of photograhy' won't notice it.

[danzspan]

Ah, true, I see your point.